{"id":1991,"date":"2016-12-18T18:42:37","date_gmt":"2016-12-18T17:42:37","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.krutomyval.com\/?p=1991"},"modified":"2016-12-18T18:51:50","modified_gmt":"2016-12-18T17:51:50","slug":"krutomyval-jak-se-prepisuje-scenar","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.krutomyval.com\/?p=1991","title":{"rendered":"Krutom\u00fdval: jak se p\u0159episuje sc\u00e9n\u00e1\u0159"},"content":{"rendered":"

1. Posledn\u00ed dobou se st\u00e1le v\u00edce odml\u010duji, a je to proto, \u017ee p\u00ed\u0161u na zak\u00e1zku rovnou pro dva projekty. Jeden je pro televizi, druh\u00fd p\u016fjde p\u0159\u00ed\u0161t\u00ed rok v \u010cR do kina. Spadla mi do kl\u00edna zak\u00e1zka „vylep\u0161it“<\/em> ji\u017e n\u011bk\u00fdm jin\u00fdm napsan\u00fd sc\u00e9n\u00e1\u0159. Romantick\u00e1 komedie to je. A m\u011b si najali, abych j\u00ed zevtipnil a p\u0159epsal linku dvou postav.<\/p>\n

2. Sc\u00e9n\u00e1\u0159 m\u00e1 140 stran, ale \u010detlo se to rychle. Prim\u00e1rn\u00ed probl\u00e9m sem m\u011bl s hlavn\u00ed hrdinkou, jeliko\u017e se mi zd\u00e1la b\u00fdti \u0161\u00edlena p\u00ed\u010da<\/del> pipinka, a p\u0159itom div\u00e1kovi m\u011bla b\u00fdt sympatick\u00e1 a bylo nutn\u00e9 aby j\u00ed fandil. \u00a0Pr\u00fd p\u00ed\u0161u n\u011bco jako \u010deskou Bridget Jones. To mi p\u0159i\u0161lo jako vtipn\u00e1 v\u00fdzva, zrovna pro mne.<\/p>\n

3. Nicm\u00e9n\u011b, ze sc\u00e9n\u00e1\u0159e p\u016fsobila zat\u00edm sp\u00ed\u0161 jako Kachna ze 4 Svateb a 1 poh\u0159bu. Nazna\u010dil sem sv\u00e9 obavy o nesnesitelnost hlavn\u00ed hrdinky re\u017eis\u00e9rovi a producentovi a byl tedy dodate\u010dn\u011b pov\u011b\u0159en i postar\u00e1n\u00edm se o to, aby hlavn\u00ed postavu div\u00e1k ne-nesn\u00e1\u0161el. Mno.<\/p>\n

4. Dostal sem docela volnou ruku, v\u010detn\u011b toho, \u017ee sem mohl vyhazovat cel\u00e9 sc\u00e9ny, m\u011bnit jejich souslednost, ale dokonce i motivaci a vztahy postav. To byla docela hozen\u00e1 rukavice, proto\u017ee zm\u011bnit sem toho cht\u011bl spoustu, ale z\u00e1rove\u0148 bylo nutno zanechat kostru p\u0159\u00edb\u011bhu, kter\u00fd n\u011bjak fungoval a to dobr\u00e9 bylo nutn\u00e9 nerozvrtat.\u00a0Zjistil sem \u017ee „zevtip\u0148ovat dialogy“<\/em> mi de docela rychle, a b\u011bhem n\u011bkolika hodin sem m\u011bl p\u0159ed\u011blanou cca t\u0159etinu a dle reakce re\u017eie i dramaturga to byla zm\u011bna k lep\u0161\u00edmu.<\/p>\n

5. Tak sem se ujal i t\u00e9 trochu slo\u017eit\u011bj\u0161\u00ed \u010d\u00e1sti \u00falohy a to sice zesympati\u010dtit hlavn\u00ed hrdinku. K tomu bylo nutn\u00e9 (z m\u00e9ho pohledu<\/em>) ale p\u0159ekopat jej\u00ed vztahy s polovinou zbyl\u00e9ho osazenstva, jeden vztah z podstaty \u00fapln\u011b zm\u011bnit, \u00a0a u n\u011bkter\u00fdch v\u0161e oto\u010dit nebo aspo\u0148 upravit dynamiku.<\/p>\n

6. A najednou bylo docela vy\u010derp\u00e1vaj\u00edc\u00ed zajistit, aby se to cel\u00fd nerozsypalo, p\u00e1\u010d kdy\u017e hlavn\u00ed hrdinka na stran\u011b 12 na n\u011bco v dialogu naraz\u00ed, vy zm\u011bn\u00edte vyzn\u011bn\u00ed t\u00e9 sc\u00e9ny, tak mus\u00edte myslet na to \u017ee na stran\u00e1ch 67 a 102 se ta v\u011bc objev\u00ed znova, a je pot\u0159eba ud\u011blat koreluj\u00edc\u00ed \u00fapravy i tam, a ejhle, to n\u00e1m najednou ovlivn\u00ed d\u011bj na stran\u011b 45, kdo to moh tu\u0161it, a helemese, tady tahle postava je nakonec \u00fapln\u011b zbyte\u010dn\u00e1, co kdybych j\u00ed vy\u0161krt. \u00a0Juj, vono se ale vo n\u00ed mluv\u00ed o p\u011bt sc\u00e9n d\u00e1l, tak tam j\u00ed nahrad\u00edm\u011b n\u011bk\u00fdm jin\u00fdm. Aj\u00e9je, bude to d\u00e1vat stejn\u00fd smysl? Atd, atd…<\/p>\n

7. Jist\u011b si um\u00edte domyslet, \u017ee p\u0159episov\u00e1n\u00ed sc\u00e9n\u00e1\u0159e je mo\u017en\u00e1 je\u0161t\u011b o n\u011bco slo\u017eit\u011bj\u0161\u00ed disclipl\u00edna, ne\u017e ps\u00e1t n\u011bco kompletn\u011b z vlastn\u00ed hlavy. \u010clov\u011bk se mus\u00ed vc\u00edt\u00edt do t\u011bch postav tak jak byly napsan\u00e9, aby tam, kde se nic m\u011bnit nemus\u00ed, byl schopen vn\u00edmat jejich osobnost a tu dostal i do t\u011bch \u010d\u00e1st\u00ed, kter\u00e9 m\u011bn\u00ed.<\/p>\n

8. Pomohlo mi i to, \u017ee mi bylo \u0159e\u010deno, kdo m\u00e1 hlavn\u00ed postavy hr\u00e1t, a moh sem si teda konkr\u00e9tn\u011b dom\u00fd\u0161let jak ta sc\u00e9na bude vypadat, podle toho jak zn\u00e1m ty herce\/here\u010dky z jin\u00fdch d\u011bl. \u00a0Minul\u00fd v\u00edkend sem draft1 odevzdal a je\u0161t\u011b m\u011b ur\u010dit\u011b \u010dek\u00e1 nejm\u00e9n\u011b jedna vlna p\u0159episov\u00e1n\u00ed. Zjistil sem, \u017ee i p\u0159es ty porodn\u00ed bolesti, se na to velmi t\u011b\u0161\u00edm.<\/p>\n

9. Den po odesl\u00e1n\u00ed sem se p\u0159i\u0161tihl, \u017ee ve\u010der us\u00edn\u00e1m s n\u011b\u010d\u00edm, co u\u017e sem skoro nedoufal, \u017ee se mi n\u011bkdy povede v mysli p\u0159ed span\u00edm zachytit. P\u0159\u00edjemn\u00fd pocit. Nad\u0161en\u00ed. Inspirace. Sp\u0159\u00e1d\u00e1n\u00ed velkolep\u00fdch pl\u00e1n\u016f (v\u010detn\u011b p\u0159\u00edpravy sv\u00e9 Oskarov\u00e9 \u0159e\u010di, samoz\u0159ejm\u011b)<\/em>. Mus\u00edm v\u00e1m \u0159\u00edct, \u017ee m\u00edt dobr\u00fd pocit z toho, \u010demu se \u010dlov\u011bk p\u0159es den v\u011bnoval, je par\u00e1da.<\/p>\n

10. U\u017e mne \u010dekaj\u00ed jen 2 m\u011bs\u00edce pr\u00e1vni\u010den\u00ed a hned pak si m\u011bn\u00edm sv\u016fj LinkedN profil na „stand-up komik\/sc\u00e9n\u00e1rista<\/em>„. A te\u010f u\u017e m\u00e1m tedy i ov\u011b\u0159en\u00e9, \u017ee to je profese, se kterou se mi bude opravdu podstatn\u011b l\u00e9pe us\u00ednat. Mo\u017en\u00e1 sice v chud\u0161\u00edm prost\u0159ed\u00ed, ale zato jednou s t\u00edm sv\u00fdm vysn\u011bn\u00fdm v\u00fdhledem na hyacinty a sluncem v du\u0161i. Ole. P\u0159eji ho i v\u00e1m.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

1. Posledn\u00ed dobou se st\u00e1le v\u00edce odml\u010duji, a je to proto, \u017ee p\u00ed\u0161u na zak\u00e1zku rovnou pro dva projekty. Jeden je pro televizi, druh\u00fd p\u016fjde p\u0159\u00ed\u0161t\u00ed rok v \u010cR do kina. Spadla mi do kl\u00edna zak\u00e1zka „vylep\u0161it“ ji\u017e n\u011bk\u00fdm jin\u00fdm napsan\u00fd sc\u00e9n\u00e1\u0159. Romantick\u00e1 komedie to je. A m\u011b si najali, abych j\u00ed zevtipnil a p\u0159epsal … Pokra\u010dov\u00e1n\u00ed textu Krutom\u00fdval: jak se p\u0159episuje sc\u00e9n\u00e1\u0159<\/span> →<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_editorskit_title_hidden":false,"_editorskit_reading_time":0,"_editorskit_is_block_options_detached":false,"_editorskit_block_options_position":"{}"},"categories":[5,4],"tags":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.krutomyval.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1991"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.krutomyval.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.krutomyval.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.krutomyval.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.krutomyval.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=1991"}],"version-history":[{"count":6,"href":"https:\/\/www.krutomyval.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1991\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1997,"href":"https:\/\/www.krutomyval.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1991\/revisions\/1997"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.krutomyval.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=1991"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.krutomyval.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=1991"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.krutomyval.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=1991"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}